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Artist's Comments

Cutting the model was a pain and the job done on model took ages but it's finally finished :)

On first look this manip seems to be very happy,relaxing but when you look at her face you see that everything isn't that perfect as it seems .She's in the Forest of Illusions.This beautiful place isn't real and she just figured that out.

:gummybear: Stock used:
*mjranum-stock model
~Kiwiaa-Stock forest
~elanordh-stock tree
~crazy-alchemist butterflies
-some things are painted

Critiques


:icontolkienmaster:
What a wonderful piece of Art! =)
Vision gets the highest rating with 5 stars thanks to the great composition and appropiate lightning, accompained with very well chosen range of green tones.
Originality gets 4 start only because we have already seen other versions of this woman swinging in a forest. But that is to be expected in a community like dA.
Technique gets the lowest rate (but still high) with 3'5 stars. The background is perfect from my point of view. Impecable blending, subtle but lovely colors and realistic soft lightning. On the other hand the blending of the model with the background is not as perfect (specially when I look at her legs and feet). Also, I don't quite like the expression on her face. I do think she should be looking more happy... either smiling or with a clam expression, eyes closed, to show relaxation. Also, I think the shiny butterflies look repetitive, since it is the same brush used over again. Different butterfly brushes would have looked better. Also, the butterflies that are nearest to her face and arms are barely notieable because of the shiny background.
Overall this is a wonderful work and I think it deserves 4'5 stars to Impact =)
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Comments


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:iconmeashadow:
Lepo, lepo.
Ali ipak moram primetiti da vrlo često koristiš slične motive... Priroda, boje itd.
Nije da ne valja, tak da nemoj mi ovo uzeti za zlo. :)

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:blackrose:~Toozakaru omoide wa itsumademo mabushi sugite...
Motto soba ni itakatta...
Mou nido to aenai kedo itsumo soba de sasaete kureta...
Anata dake wa kawaranai de ite...
Saigo ni miseta namida ga kisenakute...~:blackrose:
:iconthe-fairywitch:
Gorgeous! :clap:

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Two roads diverged in a wood, and I -
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.
(Robert Frost - The Road Not Taken)
:iconmorphine-cloud:
Perfectly magical.... awesome job on the model.... :clap:

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:blackrose: I gaze upon the mystery, this lovelorn identity...
Frozen beyond the echoes of laughter
:blackrose:

Draconian
:iconlacydrawers:
This piece is absolutely beautiful.
Your model fits perfectly into this
scene of decadent greenery and her
hair is gorgeous.
I look at this and I *SIGH* in pure
Admiration, Appreciation and Adulation......
:iconairun-lv::iconcuteicondividerplz::iconairun-lv:
:iconxbluepearlx:
hehhe baš sam ja nešto slično komenitrala feakky665 neki dan.još mi nije odgovorila ...
ma meni fotomanipulacije nisu na prvom mjestu.
kod mene u galeriju možeš nać koliko hoćeš sličnih manipulacija.Volim radit radove s prirodom u ovoj boji,a često radim serije radova koji su temom slični ili nečim drugim ali ne napišem da je to serija fotomanipualcija.Imam takvih radova na bacanje.Kad mi dođe volim napravit nešto lijepo.Ja ne mozgam satima kako da napravim nešto originalno nego vidim šta imam u folderu sa stockovima i jednostavno nešto napravim.Vidim šta se slaže i sklepam nešto po mogućnosti dobro.
Kad si već spomenula korištenje sličnih motiva itd.
Ne znam dal s primijetila ali neki od najpopularnijig fotomanipulatora koriste često iste motive evo par primjera:
freakky665 -njeni modeli su vrlo slični s obzirom na šmunku,svijetleće plave oči,plavi ili neke druge boje pramenovi,onda "bleeding" maskara,leptirići itd
lunebleu-ona vrlo vrlo često koristi neke grančice na svojim radovima,skoro na svakoj 3,4 manipulaciji,onda ono šta se zove swirls na engleskom na razne načine itd
Princess-of-Shadows- njoj na svakoj drugoj manipulaciju model ima neku vrstu krila,onda one ruke, itd.
mogla bi tako u nedogled

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drawings :damphyr: ~Diamond4girl
stock :rose: ~Esmeralda-stock
:iconxbluepearlx:
Još zam zaboravila reć da sam primjetila da sam ja dosta drugačija od drugih fotomanipulatora s obzirom na vrijeme:
-provedeno tražeći stockove
-provedeno radeći neku fotomanipulaciju
-provedeno razmišljajući šta napravit
itd.
Npr. ja kad počnem manipulaciju uvike je završim isti dan pomogućnosti bez prekidanja

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drawings :damphyr: ~Diamond4girl
stock :rose: ~Esmeralda-stock
:iconxbluepearlx:
Thank you very much :hug:

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drawings :damphyr: ~Diamond4girl
stock :rose: ~Esmeralda-stock
:iconxbluepearlx:
Thank you sooooo much for such nice comment on my work :heart:

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drawings :damphyr: ~Diamond4girl
stock :rose: ~Esmeralda-stock

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32 mm
400
May 18, 2009, 11:25:30 AM

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